where I’m from?

so we have an assignment in our ELA class

we have to write a poem type thing

here’s what i have so far

wif1

how is it?

any constructive criticism?

thanks bye

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5 comments on “where I’m from?

  1. *cough cough/
    don’t get miss milra who likes grammar but hates capitalization wrong,but isn’t the end sentence,”I am from the forestry,from the flashing lights and flipped car”,shouldn’t the “car” be plural, “cars” or “a flipped car”???
    if it’s part of your assignment i’m sorry

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