finished with this poem

wif2

how is it?

need constructive criticism like always

thanks

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16 comments on “finished with this poem

  1. the toilet that carried the dead

    help is this supposed to be funny
    is it rude to laugh ;o;

  2. i had to write a poem too, and if yours was up before my poem due date, i would’ve stole yours… that’s how good it is :’)

  3. I would steal your poem and submit it for the school magazine but the level is too high. My friend would know that I can’t write this awesome poem.

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